四、防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语。东莞成人英语培训机构

      例如：

      1、Wordy:Mylittlesisterhasapreferenceforchocolatemilk.
 
      Improved:Mylittlesisterpreferschocolatemilk.

2、Wordy:Weareinreceiptofyourletterandintendtofollowyourrecommendations.

Improved:Wehavereceivedyourletterandintendedtofollowyourrecommendation.

3、Redundant:Wehadaseriouscrisisatschoolyesterdaywhenourchemistrylaboratorycaughtfire.

Improved:Wehadacrisisatschoolyesterdaywhenourchemistrylaboratorycaughtfire.

4、Redundant:MysisterandIboughtthesame,identicaldressindifferentstores.南城成人英语学习

Improved:MysisterandIboughtthesamedressindifferentstores.

五、杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语。例如：

1、Weak:Theywillnotagreetohisproposalsinanyshapeorform.

Improved:Theywillnotagreetoanyofhisproposals.

2、Weak:IneedherfinancialinputbeforeIcanguesstimateourexpendituresnextfall.

Improved:IneedherfinancialfiguresbeforeIcanestimateourexpendituresnextfall.南城基础成人英语培训

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